People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
In current years, people who live in huge and urban areas have to directly encounter a lot of unwanted issues which range from daily activities to work stations. One may argue that governments need to encourage their citizens to relocate to rural areas, however, I reckon that this development will negatively affect citizens’ living standards.
A closer look at reality reveals that the deficiency of living space for citizens in urban areas rises dramatically in recent years. Generally speaking, people living in urban destinations always encounter issues from lack of land, which is the increase of houses’ prices and lack of living places, so that is the reason why living conditions of many citizens are currently substandard. Moreover, the proportion of homeless and robbers is always higher than normal, and it is the consequence of the increase of substandard behaviours. For example, if people do not carefully focus on their jewelry or expensive items, a sudden robber can speedily appear and take these items from you immediately.
However, in lieu of replacing people to remote areas, governments should change their current rules to help both citizens and the economy. Firstly, governments can increase the space of living lands by constructing more apartments and flats. For example, in lieu of utilizing land to build houses, they can build up many new and modern apartments with varied useful facilities and amenities inside, so it is the key to maintain the balance between populations and living spaces. Secondly, nowadays, solving the increase of homeless and robbers is not challenging in many developed countries. It is true that the deficiency of labour in varied majors raises dramatically, in terms of homeless, utilizing them for sociable majors such as employees in environmental conservation companies is the best way to tackle issues because governments can both increase their living standard and magnificent scenery in urban areas.
In conclusion, to tackle issues belonging to urban areas, in lieu of replacing citizens, utilizing them in useful and productive majors will be more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39402985075 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88787110341 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5191081901 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157226239404 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602296802701 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426043569359 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893542649133 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516176502434 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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