People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country To what extent do you agree or disagree

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People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Concerning the issue of following the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country, it is believed that foreigners should adapt to the local customs and traditions when they to reside in a new country. As far as I am concerned, I do partially agree with the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
First of all, it can be said with certainty that local people will accept newcomers who do this - more integration, easier to make friends. The key explanation is possibly because local people will be more welcoming when they fell that the newcomers are showing respect for the local way of life.
Second of all, a special consideration in this case is that new immigrants will enjoy the traditions and be able to take part in community life, have a knowledge about their customs. Example, they can enjoy festival, exchange traditions between countries make a mutual understanding.
In contrast, it must be admitted that we have different the norms of social behavior. Most people would agree that they can be social isolated. It will become almost impossible to get used to new environment. Newcomers will certainty face difficulties if they do not conform to host country’s law. For instance, when people drive on highway, if they do not know about their traffic rules, they can be punished. Besides, newcomers might fall foul of the law if they do not respect the behavior and customs of local. In Singapore, residents will consider newcomers dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public places.
Taking everything into consideration, people have to weigh up in their thought to what extent this issue should be support. However, the decisions are convincing enough to lead me to conclusion that it is essential foe new residents to follow the traditions and habit of the local in the host community in order to integrate fully into society.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, in contrast, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90490797546 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75840639557 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530674846626 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4711139638 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297172974307 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966454899691 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943079548568 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174101989438 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103046309899 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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