A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
As we know, there are now some arguments about the two ideas that whether capital assets or position in society will be elements to consider that person's worth or the other good personalities. Although the term of money is extremely vital in today's society, I think that we should not miss any individuals' kindness.
Why did some people think social position and asset are important? Because without them, there is little chance of making your dream come true. Moreover, despite how many one person can earn a day now, these materials still be what we try our best to achieve. As an example, an individual has the ability to become a politician if they have enough money for their academic education and the power related to persuading other residents. The power of money also take your steps easier to get the position that makes others proud of yourself.
In contrast, some characteristics which related to the past still be appropriated. Unless we felt deeply about the pain of the environment that we damaged for many years, we would make the biggest reunion between people in order to find out the best solution to save what we have done. More than that, we can obviously see that many charities and blood donations have been celebrated to give it to those who are suffering from lack of blood situations. All of these activities not only show the love between humans but also be worth to give many compliments.
In conclusion, besides what did others say about the necessity of money and status, I personally believe that the value of humans' characteristics still exists and has its own importance in another meaning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ty, I think that we should not miss any individuals kindness. Why did some people think so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62120652651 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9327060586 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0994866415438 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370274258617 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316142089658 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064637709241 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194854410477 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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