The qualities that make someone admirable
Perhaps, in our life, every person has at least a role model or an ideal sample to follow. Apparently, different people do not the same in their own standards to admire someone. In my opinion, success, knowledge, and honesty are three common qualities that make a person become admirable.
In my belief, there are three elements that contribute most to allowing someone to be distinguished. First and foremost, success is the result of hard-working. Clearly, those who achieved success, are absolutely experienced many times of failure, but they can be defeated by the difficulties, and they overcame with the victory these days. Another quality of an admirable person is knowledge. Obviously, gaining a particular level of knowledge is a long-term process, because knowledge is limitless. We need to study, experience, and experiment in even whole life. Finally, honesty is the best policy. Of course, the person we admire must be outstanding and reliable, this person can inspire us to desire becoming a person like this sample. We never think highly about a dishonest mirror.
As a final observation, no matter how admirable we give to somebody, we need to know the qualities and reasons for this admiration. I base on the effectiveness of three factors in terms of success, knowledge, and honesty to measure someone is admirable or not.
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These are the three qualities that everyone is trying to achieve success, not just me. traffic jam 3d
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, if, so, at least, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13242009132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96258719982 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3965320135 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2857142857 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236090708884 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698187727955 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838677355538 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16916087767 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488390702402 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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