Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, both food and drinks having been verified to endanger societies’ health should be freely unacceptable. I, personally, state the same perspective of this issue for the reasonable points, which will be deliberated in this following essay.
On the one side, one of the main reasons unhealthy food exists is that it can be cheaper and more convenient to produce and purchase than healthy food. Generally, this eases low-income people to obtain dietary needs. Sadly, this triggers and hampers low-grade inflammation causing chronic diseases (strokes), which people adopt unhealthy lifestyle behaviours. Furthermore, supermarkets selling packaged food and soft drinks usually donate highest taxes to state, due to operating 24 hours a day, so that society could continually purchase junk food. Subsequently, a great number of teenagers spend their leisure time with purchasing product they are desired.
On the flip side, low-nutrient foods that people often consume multiple times per day include the primary source of calories. Adults consuming regular amounts of fast and junk food will have negative effects on body, a lower risk of obesity. Thus, this will encumber government due to increasing the number of obesity in region. In addition, to induce aggravate symptoms of mental illnesses. When consumes certain foods in excess can bring significant changes to the neurotransmitters that dependent on junk foods whenever people feel low. This can hamper the signalling of neurotransmitters such as dopamine and serotonin (the happy hormones), so that this can lead to depression and other mental health disorders.
In conclusion, in my standpoint, unhealthy snacks to be banned are more beneficial. Those include almost all of junk food including many calories as well as deteriorating disorder of mental health. This is as long as cheap food more nutrients.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'donate the highest'.
Suggestion: donate the highest
...g packaged food and soft drinks usually donate highest taxes to state, due to operating 24 hou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51388888889 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96142900107 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649305555556 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.078446745 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190125502312 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609594875589 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637337892873 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130361728209 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618012590438 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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