Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against common child hood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Some people argue whether it is a good idea to be obliged to immunize young children against common childhood diseases, while some others believe that it should be a free choice. This essay will discuss the reasons behind the importance of vaccinations and why they should be an obligation for the children.
Unfortunately, some of the most common childhood illnesses are potentially fatal, and vaccines were tested and created during the years to cut the spread risk of those mortal diseases among younger and older people. By making some types of vaccinations mandatory, we were able to reduce the morbidity and morbosity of those illnesses, and some of them became globally very rare. For example, if measles is caught very early in life when the immune system is not strong enough to defeat it, the symptoms can become very severe, up to the death of the patient. immunization has not to be a choice.
In the second instance, those who get vaccinated against those highly dangerous diseases promote a very important chain reaction, because they end up protecting immunosuppressed people. This happens because of the viruses not being spread among communities, and this phenomenon is called "herd immunity". In that way, many ill people affected by HIV, Leukemia or other immunodeficiencies can be kept safe, such as, when they are in social situations such as school classes or movie theaters.
To sum up, even though there were many diatribes about the importance and safety of vaccinations and immunizations in the past few years, giving the choice should not be an option. Childhood illnesses are potentially dangerous for various categories of people, and kids should be vaccinated to protect theirs and their community's health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Immunization
...severe, up to the death of the patient. immunization has not to be a choice. In the second ...
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Suggestion:
...odeficiencies can be kept safe, such as, when they are in social situations such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18374558304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91609580237 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.5736621053 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.363636364 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232140313061 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981698785711 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783427321963 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149782130356 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787353951859 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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