Topic: New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the realm of cutting-edge technology, individuals’ lifestyles have changed in every aspect of all ages, particularly children. In fact, advanced technology is one of the key factors that contribute to adjusting the way children spend their spare time. From my perspective, they are overshadowed by the benefits that technology offers young people.
One major ground behind the reason why many people claim that technology is negative for children is that could pose a risk to both physical and mental health. This is because children might have a tendency to spend a vast amount of time surfing on the Internet, getting too much screen time. Therefore, they do not have enough time to participate in outside activities or hit the gym regularly, leading to severe chronic diseases such as obesity or heart attack, even at an early age. Furthermore, it is not only physical health but also mental well-being. As youngsters are destined to excessively utilize social media platforms, they no longer maintain face-to-face interactions with other people or have intimate relationships, thus being prone to sleep deprivation or psychological matters.
On the flip side, technology’s advantages should also be taken into consideration due to promoting learning and skills development. Today, there is a vast array of educational apps and games that enable children to learn mathematics, science, and language skills in a simple, fun, and engaging manner without having to be in a classroom with a teacher. In addition. Video games have the potential to teach children problem-solving, and critical thinking. And hand-eye coordination skills. Thanks to breakthroughs in digital technology, these days, youngsters are likely to strike up a conversation or qualified relationship with foreigners through virtual reality, doing away with distance barriers.
In conclusion, while certain technologies are associated with a number of potential disadvantages for children, the negative impacts can be avoided through effective parental control regarding the amount of time that children spend using such technologies and the type of content that they view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...to be in a classroom with a teacher. In addition. Video games have the potential to teac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56838905775 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17284756762 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647416413374 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4999926416 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.857142857 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267018567147 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074600632315 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068666098348 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161198097915 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500575757301 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.