The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate about whether society could derive the benefits from a prohibition on all types of promoting. Although I ally myself with the opinion that advertisements might have some ominous bearings on society, I would advocate that this form of art should not be forbidden.
On the one hand, a vast array of factors has made promoting become unfavorable to some extent. Firstly, owing to the lack of authenticity of some social websites, information instilled into customers’ mind via adverts on these apps would be unreliable. To illustrate, in Vietnam, a great number of beverage manufacturers have posted their promotions which disseminate and exaggerate misinformation relating to the quality of their products on Youtube. Consequently, if customers trust in these advertisements and make up their mind to purchase these kinds of drinks, they have to face with the risks of contracting some digestion-related illnesses. Furthermore, some promotions consist of antisocial content, which is not appropriate with the ethical values of society. It could lead to the fact that should individuals are exposed too much to bad information in adverts, they can be guided to the wrong path.
On the other hand, there are a host of justifications prevailing me on conceding that advertisements are necessary in society. The first reason is that promoting could be considered to be one of the most effective ways for companies to inform their consumers about their products. This can be perfectly exemplified by the fact that the general director of Tesla, which is a prestigious car making corporation, has launch many advertising campaigns in order to give customers information about its innovations. Accordingly, the profit and revenues of this organization would increase substantially thanks to the auspicious effects of advertising. Moreover, promoting industry creates more occupation prospects for the public. For example, Phuong Nam start, an advertising company in Vietnam, has employed plenty of workers having a good command of using computers, which enables them to have incomes to make ends meet. Thus, but for the promoting industry, a large number of Vietnamese inhabitants would be jobless.
In conclusion, apparently, it is indisputable that advertising would have some drawbacks; nevertheless, I want to affirm that this form of art still serves such an indispensable and fundamental role in this civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beverages'?
Suggestion: beverages
...lustrate, in Vietnam, a great number of beverage manufacturers have posted their promoti...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...g path. On the other hand, there are a host of justifications prevailing me on conc...
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Line 3, column 956, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
.... Thus, but for the promoting industry, a large number of Vietnamese inhabitants would be jobless...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46315789474 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27579894465 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.75 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154199273826 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482484359131 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387788840792 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106475914524 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456623581084 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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