Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowaday, technology is present in many aspects of people's lives. Beside the disadvantages, technology also helps people to solve problems quickly and more easily. In my opinion, it is unfair to condemn technology without acknowledging its silent yet enormous contribution to society.
Technological innovations solved plenty of big problems for people. One of the positives that technology presents is medical advancements. According to experts, the invention of antibiotics help prolong the average lifespan of humans. Also, modern medicine with advanced technology equipment raises the survival rate of patients and cures diseases that no one thought to make better before. Secondly, the growth of mobile devices and the explosion of mobile applications help people save time and simplify procedures. For example, a delivery food app with a few taps, the food is delivered right to your place without spending too much time. With modern technology, people no longer have to go to the place to buy tickets, but booking tickets online through very fast and convenient applications. Moreover, learning and working becomes more convenient and effective with the participation of technology. To be specific, during the outbreak of the covid 19 pandemic, social distancing, all activities were interrupted, but due to technology, studying and working remotely can continue to take place on cyberspace or online platforms.
All in all, I subscribe to the belief that there should be a clear distinction between the merits and disadvantages that technology brings. Technology was born to make people's lives easier and people should not deny. If technology disappears, it will become difficult to find alternative solutions to answer the mentioned problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58052434457 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05631746771 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5753131878 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151661443541 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540986775056 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417683691883 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117724188463 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033880709492 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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