Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, using modern technology devices such as smartphones has become a popular habit, among which children are included. This essay will analyze the reasons for the excessive use of smartphones by children and explain whether this habit is beneficial or unbeneficial for these young individuals.
With regard to this habit, there are several fundamental factors leading to it. An apparent element is the diverse source of entertainment on smartphones. These devices are now connected to the internet, which combines a variety of game apps as well as online platforms such as YouTube or Facebook. The attractive and amusing contents of these are able to cause addiction among children. However, the most significant aspect might be a lack of parental management. In particular, a large number of parents still let their kids play on smartphones uncontrollably. This deed partly comes from the overindulgence of parents but also from their inadequate knowledge about this issue.
In my view, this habit has to be terminated due to its detrimental effects. Firstly, an apparent consequence is its harmfulness to children’s health. Specifically, the screen of smartphones emits a large amount of blue light into our eyes. In the long term, it will lead to visual diseases such as myopia or astigmatism. Secondly, smartphone addiction can keep children from contacting family members. This will cause division in the family as well as poor communication skills among the children.
In conclusion, the habit of overusing smartphones among children comes primarily from poor parental management and uncomplicated platform accessibility. On account of their long-term illnesses and the loss of connection with their families, I strongly oppose this habit and hope that people will soon address a practical solution to this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, in my view, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47349823322 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08312746033 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3302803919 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214841668553 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663300409877 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517913376947 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145827569248 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114405793622 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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