In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the number of people have obesity or overweight increases, which leads to many health problems. So in this essay, I will shed light on the cause and measurements of the topic.
At the present, people have to work or learn in school from 7 am to 5 pm and the workplace or school are maybe too far to move. They do not have much time to prepare their breakfast, lunch and dinner. Therefore, eating outside is the most common choice. Apart from being busy, people seem to be too lazy to cook at home because it also takes a considerable amount of time. So, they usually go to restaurants to have a meal. For some people who are bad at cooking. In addition, maybe they do not know how to choose fresh food. However, victuals which chef or store owner choose can be spoiled. If you often read newspapers, you will see a lot of cases of food poisoning. Another reason for increasing the average weight of people is that they do not care about the amount of food or calories which they have in each meal.
All of the causes that lead to many bad consequences of human health, such as obesity, diabetes, and arthritis. So, we have to take steps to solve this problem. First, I think eating a diet is the easiest way to lose weight. We should wake up early to go jogging around the park and get some fresh air. If you do not have enough time in the morning, you can do this in the afternoon or evening. After doing exercise, we can cook some healthy food to bring to the workplace instead of eating junk food like fish balls, milktea and rice paper. Dividing into small portions will prevent you from suddenly hunger during the day. We ought to take advantage of break time to play some sport or stretch your muscles.
In conclusion, each country should have solutions to solve the problem of increasing the weight of people. In my opinion, overweight is not good for health so I have to do much exercise to avoid this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...alories which they have in each meal. All of the causes that lead to many bad consequenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, apart from, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41736694678 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34031224686 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2530648676 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6818181818 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2272727273 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220753138816 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610374650453 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421575416204 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134532360238 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327169421255 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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