In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, it is clear that a number of people experience increasing of overweight and unhealthy in several notions. There are several causes and considerable solutions which we will elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, enhancement of overweight people rate is afflicted by many instant foods which contain the mouth-watering foods. With flavouring and interested colours, particularly adolescents, they continually tend to purchase junk food such as Pizza and Kentucky Fried Chicken (KFC) inducing their weight uncontrolled. Furthermore, people, especially students and workers, which have hustle and bustle activities from hectic schedules in completing their tasks undergo lack of sleep. Generally, ones face several symptoms (fatigue and lower blood-pressure) hindering their activities when they are studying or working, therefore, many of them should manage their time well.
Turning to the solution, governments could trigger to put the highest taxes and operational hours. In connection with prohibiting open in 24-hours, business owner would be careful on serving their cuisines and supply organic and fresh ingredients, which do not contain Good Manufacturer Practices (GMP), and thus, many people which is prone illness a disease (diarhea) is difficult to outbreaks. In addition, there is campaign to apply good habits to such local medical care. This aims so as to educate public (elderlies) to do sports minimal twice a week, in which all of people living in such areas can be inspired in these programs.
In conclusion, the causes of overweight and unhealthy to public may include the simple and practices food along with hectic schedules. Meanwhile, the plausible solutions include setting tax and operational time as well as inviting people to exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62686567164 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92900703327 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.170870268 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.666666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127948994465 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414898447093 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241521114165 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692264426317 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215685289016 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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