In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some countries it is believed that the average weight of people is increasing while their health and fitness level is deteriorating, This essay believes the fact that unbalanced diet due to busy life is the ideal cause and the prime Solution is to perform physical activity along with having proper nutrition.
Mostly in developed countries many people have a hectic schedule which donot allow them to consume home cooked meal, rather makes a compulsion to eat food directly from fast food chain which is root cause of increasing weight The workload and imbalance lifestyle fosters to lead a unhealthy lifestyle which in turn deteriorate the fitness of people. For instance, people working in giant companies in developed cities tend to gain weight by this cause.
Looking for the solution to this cause emphasizing on physical activity and following proper nutrition are found to be the best solution. As busy lifestyle is ubiquitous in this era, managing time out of hard-pressed routine for some exercise, mainly cardio will help. get to this phase thoroughly. Moreover, consuming proper nutrition including such as micro out of both kinds of nutrients and micro will boost the health. For example, in many countries it is found that people who are involved in some kind of physical activity, are far away from gaining weight.
To conclude, change in routine to follow proper meal and introduction of physical activity in our life are the main causes and solution to lead a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63978167246 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4930027816 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.111111111 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183497384298 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674751945723 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628452070679 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110771458094 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696218964151 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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