In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is observed in many nations that individuals are prone to prioritise to purchase products via the Internet rather than go to commercial centers. Although some experts acknowledge that this propensity might be fraught with a lot of ominous bearings, I would argue that buyers can reap the benefits of shopping online.
On the one hand, a vast array of factors has convinced many people to concede that this trend is unfavorable in some facets. The first justification is that a great number of sellers and individuals in stores may be unemployed in the near future if consumers gradually prefer to buy goods online. This can be perfectly exemplified in case of a survey showing a decline in the quantity of visitors to BigC supermarkets . It leads to the fact that this incorporation has to face the bankruptcy and staff will lose their occupations in years to come. Furthermore, in terms of shopping online, it is very hard for buyers to verify the quality of the products that they want to purchase. For instance, many consumers have posted complaints on some apps like Sendo or Tiki due to the low-standard goods delivered to them. Nevertheless, this issue would be tackled if commercial app companies have judicious approaches.
On the other hand, there a a host of merits that shopping via the Internet could bring. Firstly, It might help individuals save a great amout of time since they do not need to allocate their time to commute to shops. To illustrate, it could take 10 minutes for a person to buy a dress online, compared to about an hour for her to make a deal when it comes to direct shopping. Thus, in lieu of sparing too much time for going to stores, buyers are capable of looking for some other types of goods. Moreover, plenty of commercial apps offer a wide range of products for purchasers to select which can satisfy their demands. Accordingly, they can make appropriate decisions.
In conclusion, apparently, It cannot be denied that the substitution of online purchasing for the direct one would have a lot of drawbacks; However, I want to affirm that this tendency could be beneficial to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83923705722 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82357748115 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553133514986 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6745935612 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0945286803811 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301850491871 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333048291212 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600729869886 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00786115409036 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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