Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
It is often argued by some companies that a neat outfit is necessory for their workers, while others thinks the outcome of the job is more than the looks. However, in my opinion even though,dress code makes a good atmosphere to the workplace, the overall result or quality of products is the must needs for the success of any organisation.
On the one hand, elegant dress or uniform of the employers makes a feel good climate inside the office both employees and the customers. That appearence attract the people to approach them and to seek their support services for their needs. For example, good looking and smart outfits are indeed for some kind of jobs including , flight assistance,sales girls and receptionists to . The employees services and presentations would affect the companies future profit to some extent. Additionally, work place discrimination might be diminish when the all the employees have the same smart and elegant dresses.
On the other hand, there are pellets of aspects needed for the victory of an organisation. Firstly, the grade of work would be assessed by the product quality, result of the project and the charecter of the employees. The failure of the project could not be replaced with the smiling face or smart dress. Secondly, employees should work efficiently and effectively irrespective of their style in certain circumstances. For example, teachers must be well behaved and shows a agood mannerism to their students despite the stylish look.
To sum up, along with beautiful cloths, all employees in various organisations must need some intelligence and practical thinking that would be the major trait every companies should follow than anything
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8810007444 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9543724472 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193082109702 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667124716509 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231105332225 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112081171958 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332349715451 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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