Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views whether there is no better way with the exception of accepting a bad situation like lower money or an unexpected job. Although it can be argued that people find it better to enhance such situations. I believe that people should try their best to get out of those.
Growing body research suggests that the bad situation also has a generally positive effect on people who were in this situation. They believe if they overcome such a situation, some good news will bring to them. For instance, in Vietnam fairy tales, there was a man who was disabled to do everything on a daily basis. To be more precise, he just stayed in one location and waited for someone to bring food to him. After a long time, fortunately, there was a woman who brought to him a lot of money and he became a wealthy man immediately. Hence, accepting a bad situation could not totally lead to a deterioration of fate.
Besides, others argue that it is better to enhance such situations. I believe the reason they act that way is because they will screw up if they do not adapt to their situations. For instance, a person owes a large sum of money and the number of their jobs at the moment are not enough for them to pay their debts. This means that they try hard to find more jobs so that they could pay their debts as soon as possible. Moreover, they also gain extra money to pay their daily expenses such as electricity and water bills. Since then, their problems could be alleviated and they do not worry about those.
In conclusion, although there are benefits to accepting a bad situation, it is clear that people should try and improve their situation instead of agreeing with this. On balance, I would argue that being in a better situation by your efforts will be more beneficial than others' efforts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...nt views whether there is no better way with the exception of accepting a bad situation like lower mo...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... like lower money or an unexpected job. Although it can be argued that people find it be...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
... I believe the reason they act that way is because they will screw up if they do not adapt...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...tuation, it is clear that people should try and improve their situation instead of agre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57975460123 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47878005457 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.429557467 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294650782614 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992929019258 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796717163555 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20949950023 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10222917995 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.