Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on how people should respond to bad situations, such as when they have unrewarding jobs or encounter financial difficulties. While acceptance may be the most reasonable option in some cases, I contend that making an effort for positive changes would generally be more beneficial.
Many individuals may choose to embrace negative situations because doing so can give them a sense of mental release and clarity. This is often true for those constantly stuck with jobs offering little prospects or having little money despite their best efforts in improving their conditions. By coming to terms with such circumstances, these individuals can start making practical adjustments, such as lowering their expectations or reducing their expenses, while seeking positivity in other aspects of life, such as in their family connections or personal hobbies. In contrast, making efforts that are repeatedly fruitless can ultimately be detrimental, wasting the limited resources and time that could have been more meaningfully invested in the aforementioned areas.
Notwithstanding the above argument, I assert that trying to improve bad situations can yield both practical and intangible gains. With regard to the former, it is often possible for people to improve their situations so long as the most proper solutions are selected. For instance, those with unsatisfactory jobs can either recommend changes to their employers or pivot into new careers, while individuals suffering from money shortages can take more job offers. Obviously, making the right decision in these situations is not always straightforward and risk-free; however, the possibility of making improvement does exist and should not be unduly overlooked. More importantly, when people constantly try to improve their life, this could give them a sense of purpose and motivation. Even if their situations do not necessarily improve drastically, they would gain enriching experiences and have fewer regrets as they get older and opportunities become less available.
In conclusion, accepting a bad situation could be a sensible solution in some cases. Nevertheless, I believe that it is better for individuals to try and improve their conditions, as this may potentially not only lead to tangible improvements, but also a high level of satisfaction in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
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Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...level of satisfaction in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in some cases, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55988857939 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12131378791 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57938718663 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3159623386 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.571428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27705021659 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944877789865 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04436618705 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166128559386 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299261386719 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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