Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the era of research and development, some people believe that any information required for such purpose should be provided. However, I would agree with those who argue that some information is confidential and should be kept to themselves.
First of all, there is no doubt that information used in research is essential in fields like science, business and acedimics. This is because the data can help fill the gaps in knowledge. For example, In the field of medicine, surveys conducted can help identify if the drugs used to treat patients for the same ailment work similarly.
It helps in development of new treatments and makes sure we use existing treatments in the best possible way. Furthermore, in business
information collected can be used to understand issues and raise public awareness.
Nevertheless, sometimes on the name of research and business people are hoodwinked and asked about personal information which in most cases is irrelevant to any academic or business use. For instance, people can be asked about their interests in different products and spending habits. This data can then be sold to marketing or advertising agencies who would lure people into buying products which they were interested in. Thus, information can be misused by sharing it to unwanted users.
In conclusion, although information plays a vital role in science, business and academics. It is important for people to consider the purpose and motive of research in order to avoid getting swindled by deceivers pretending to be using data for genuine purposes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21912350598 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90138878061 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2933605906 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231965694999 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879167448717 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661109520722 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11356211566 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664144658667 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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