Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, countries has a large amount of study information and knowledge that help them to improve their country in different areas. A section of thought that this knowledge will be in access of other countries while others argue that, this information is expensive, and give to other freely.
Firstly, people argue that, this knowledge is collected by spending the time and huge proportion of budget. Universities spend huge money to collect raw data and then spend a significant time on it to reshape it although some times human lives are in risk to collect this data. On based of this data economy drive country system. For example, a country collect money by taxes and spend it innovate technologies which helps drive their industry and industry will produce jobs for local. If others get this information without any effort then how this country will recover their money.
On the other hand, people thought that each country should have equal opportunities to solve their problem. Most of the poor regions are not able to produce their own information and scientific innovations. Other regions which had immense information should provide to poor people. For instance, if America gives access to Africa where they do have basic facilities. Due to this knowledge they will be able to design some new factories and make some water cleaning plants that gives health life.
In conclusion, the scientific knowledge collect by spend significant money and time however I believe that some information will be open for everyone which related to basic human needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'country collect money'.
Suggestion: country collect money
...nomy drive country system. For example, a country collect money by taxes and spend it innovate technolo...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'innovates'?
Suggestion: innovates
...try collect money by taxes and spend it innovate technologies which helps drive their in...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d industry will produce jobs for local. If others get this information without any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.140625 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56763966271 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3465974822 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.230769231 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154094532295 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622685156548 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487043016471 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11782721084 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471245406778 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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