Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about publicizing information. While some claim that all the information must be shared in details in any sector, others argue that some information has significant value and should not be shared free of charged. Although, I believe science must be accessible to everyone, I support the latter view and think some information is precious.
On the one hand, it brings enormous benefits to publicize all the information. Comprehending information and the knowledge followed by that, are every investigator's right. Knowledge should not be curbed to a specific group or industry. Sharing data with others help to increase science progress, be aware of environment, enhance processes and prohibit future failures. For example, some software programs are open source. In this case, other programmers all over the world, can access the code free of charge and if there would be any bugs, they can fix it as soon as possible. Therefore, the program is always up-to-date, without any error.
On the other hand, some information has high significance that should not be easily accessible without any payment. For instance, people's health data matters a lot. This information is recorded in private. If any healthcare research is going to be conducted, scientist must get verification and pay fees to access the data. Furthermore, some data relates to security. As an example, research on government's legal logs is related to people's safety and security. Thus, all the information should not be publicized easily.
In conclusion, people have various visions about sharing data and information. Although, some believe freely publishing any information in details, others think not all data should be published like that. I go with the second idea.
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give your own op 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
...nce, peoples health data matters a lot. These information is recorded in private. If any healthca...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...n governments legal logs are related to peoples safety and security. Thus, all the info...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01021168891 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0043250257 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5882352941 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265359509538 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827303185227 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645613983377 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177860869883 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748207606743 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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