Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that school student should not taken homework by their tutor, but on other aspects they advice that homework keep a huge function in the education of teenagers. In my opinion boths view have their benefit and drawback with each person. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly.
On the one hand, children who are not given homework by their teachers will be free for doing their hobby. teenagers will be more creative becauce they can do whatever they want and do anythings they fell interested. Spending more time to improve themselves, learning more skills which is very significant in for their life in the near future. Furthermore, students will have more time to relax, entertain and take a distance away from stress after the lesson.For instance, children show their best ability at school so they need the time for relaxing like playing game, listenning to music or camping with their family. In the nagative aspects, student who were not done homework for a long time their knowledge will be easy for losing because they do not have time to practise and prepare the lesson at home. following this, their learning achievement are going to be worser.
On the other hand, doing homework will help children improve and train their knowledge which they learn at the school for understanding more clearly. this knowledge will be a layer for the next lecture, their brain have enough knowledge for studying the new lesson better. Moreover, teenagers who doing homework will be more discipline, independent and confident. Making a good habit and becoming the genuine students. For example, these is a circul systerm the talent children will be hard working for doing their homework and then they will better than them before.
In addition, if these are too much homework, student will not have time for taking a rest. Youngs person will easy to get lack, pressure and overload.
To conclude, children who were not given homework by their teacher and students who were done homework are have both advantage and drawback appropriate with each person, so parent and teach need to know the ability of each children to give them appropriate method for improving themselves better than before and become a talent person in the furture.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
... their tutor, but on other aspects they advice that homework keep a huge function in t...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...erson. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly. On the one hand, chil...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...analyse these statement more clearly. On the one hand, children who are not gi...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teenagers
...ers will be free for doing their hobby. teenagers will be more creative becauce they can ...
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Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...tance away from stress after the lesson.For instance, children show their best abil...
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Line 2, column 815, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...ractise and prepare the lesson at home. following this, their learning achievement are go...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g achievement are going to be worser. On the other hand, doing homework will h...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... school for understanding more clearly. this knowledge will be a layer for the next ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to get lack, pressure and overload. To conclude, children who were not given...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...and students who were done homework are have both advantage and drawback appropriate...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01322751323 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41740612139 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8652904715 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247702346232 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946500261654 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077827108432 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162621831141 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689165160023 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: ADVICE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
Suggestion: advise
... their tutor, but on other aspects they advice that homework keep a huge function in t...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...erson. The following essay will analyse these statement more clearly. On the one hand, chil...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...analyse these statement more clearly. On the one hand, children who are not gi...
^^
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Teenagers
...ers will be free for doing their hobby. teenagers will be more creative becauce they can ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 464, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...tance away from stress after the lesson.For instance, children show their best abil...
^^^
Line 2, column 815, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...ractise and prepare the lesson at home. following this, their learning achievement are go...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g achievement are going to be worser. On the other hand, doing homework will h...
^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... school for understanding more clearly. this knowledge will be a layer for the next ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to get lack, pressure and overload. To conclude, children who were not given...
^^
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...and students who were done homework are have both advantage and drawback appropriate...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01322751323 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41740612139 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8652904715 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247702346232 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946500261654 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077827108432 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162621831141 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689165160023 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.