Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
It is the importance for the nations to consider the waste recycling issue and put laws imposing people to do that. I Strongly agree with this viewpoint, because the waste recycling saves the money and decrease the pollution. In this essay Will explain the reason behind this phenomenon.
In the first place, many people do not follow the rules unless feel there is a punishment. If the government imposes people To recycle their waste, the pollution will decrease in the environment. Moreover, the air will be clear from bad smells. For Example, the Syrian government issues law for waste recycling, the latest statistics show improvement in the quality of air.
On the other hand, the forcing people to do the waste recycling policy will save the public money. In addition, governments Should use the media in order to raise public awareness in relation to recycling.
lastly, the recycling will make a huge difference if all companies used biodegradable plastic for their products, as the Disposal of regular plastic is a threat to the environment.
In conclusion, if governments do not tackle this issue immediately the consequences are going to be catastrophic in the Long run. Furthermore, It is imperative that the issue of waste is addressed so as to reduce the risk to people's health due to potential Health hazards as well as governments should take effective measures to eliminate the toxic fumes released into the Atmosphere by the disposal of waste, especially plastic. However, governments should create laws to combat the problem of the Disposal of waste and ensure that people abide by these laws through regular inspections.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16356877323 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85319799449 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.48013024 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269092692248 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979292677828 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648455350606 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149065036773 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321262963948 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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