Some people prefer cold weather conditions, while others don’t.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
An often contested subject is the weather. While many people prefer cold wave atmosphere, many still show a tendency toward hot climates. This essay will look at both sides and draw a concluding opinion.
Some group of people prefer cold weather since it offers some opportunities to local residents in special areas. To put simply, the income of numerous tourist attraction careers in mountainous cities drastically increase in the cold seasons. For instance, China annually has a festival in the winter to promote its local arts as well customs by creating Ice sculptures, souvenirs, and as a result, attract a vast array of tourists that utterly helps local residents to generate revenue. In short, cold climate determined as a fruitful season by some group of people as it leads to flourishing their jobs.
Conversely, other groups of people do not like the cold wave just because of its contribution to decrease their incomes and curb their works on site. In other words, there is an intrinsic link between weather and an array of job-related activities. For instance, some careers required fair climate to take part more actively in society such as taxi drivers, construction’s labours, heavy vehicle drivers and so forth, as cold weather place them in severe conditions. Finally, the cold weather contributes to increasing the amount of lower-income families and this leads many residences do give preference to cold weather.
In conclusion, some people based on their job position prefer cold climate, while others not. Thus, the cold wave can be preferred by only some residence, but it does not seem to be likeable to all people. In my opinion, hot weather brings more advantages by more than 50 % to local people, and as a result, have more advocates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, look, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08934707904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81897996761 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5336141175 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329917401069 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110416341178 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070409916176 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195099592251 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342479111467 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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