Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Large companies and industries facilities are mostly located inside the cities where we naturally live our life. Some people think that it would be better to move all the large companies and industries outside the cities. In this essay, in this essay, I will discuss the major advantages and disadvantage of moving large cooperates to remote places far where people practice their daily activates.
There are many advantages why organizational industries should exist near to where we live. For the most part, Millions of employees working in organizations wake up in the morning and get dressed to drive to where they work. Most people spend a lot of time in the car if the distance is far away. As a result, it wastes a lot of time doing nothing behind the diving wheel. For example, I drive around forty five minutes to my work located on highway outside the city. I can imagine investing this time in developing myself or to spend with my family. Therefore, industrial organizations inside the city will make the employee's life much easier and comfortable.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages of locating organizations inside large urban centers. Most of the companies have the same starting and finishing time. Thus, large amount of employees will use the roads at the same time to drive back to their homes, which cause traffic congestion for all the residents driving in this time. Moreover, some industries may cause many kind of pollutions that can threaten the lives of people living nearby.
In conclusion, some people can benefit from living near to their workplaces. But on the contrary, a lot of other people living in the same city, will damage their peaceful state of living. That's why I would recommend moving all the large originations and industries outside cities so that people can live their life away from traffic congestion and pollutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99365079365 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65783495946 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520634920635 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1466408243 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5294117647 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283409931711 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957314349466 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123585004572 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187771831312 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1171862865 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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