Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environment problems

Essay topics:

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems.

Majority of people believe that the basic environmental trouble of our age is the loss of particular types of plents and animals. Other people consider that there are highly significant environmental problems.
Actually, it is the most important problem is extinction of plants and animals in our lives then in a sense, world have a other worst problem now. Tje rate of extinction increase gradually especially species of plants and animals where forests has been destroyed for different purposes, for instance, for to build various city and maybe establish new farms.
On the other consequences from environmental problems, air pollution gradually growth of degree in recently years this is reasons humans is becoming harmful to air , an example, nowadays, almost all of people have a car and drive all days. Else, different farms is manufactored products by gas and oil after it is brought to destroy fresh air. One of the ones, water pollution is the main trouble in reason, plenty of people throw away rubbish in the river and that near the water places. Clearly, it is blamed only humans for pollution that this condition has been going on for many years.
According to some scientists, if this ones considerably growth around the world probably encounter various type of issues from it.
To sum up, in many of special plants and animals that it involves kind of air pollution or water pollution and other ones. Certainly, government try to stop this statement however can not avoid environmental problems.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0843373494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74499107467 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5704833275 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.090909091 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226215425044 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822341342322 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799849541753 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117912852873 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076424937025 0.056905535591 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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