Some people say that outdoor activities bring benefits to children's development rather than computer games. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
There is a common belief that it is better to encourage children to take part in outdoor sports and leisure activities than let them spend many hours sitting in front computer screen. While computer games are undeniably fun, I am totally convinced by the view that outdoors activities are more beneficial for children’s physical and mental development.
The first reason in favor of my argument is that playing too much computer games results in some negative consequences. In terms of physical health, youngsters who are glued to their games consoles may lead a sedentary lifestyle and soon become prone to obesity. Such pattern of behavior does harm to the muscle and immune system during their formative years. From the perspective of mental development, children who are addicted to video games, for example, may suffer from mental health problems such as lack of concentration, stress and anxiety.
Another reason supporting my view is that taking up sports not only build up resistance but also provide children with new experiences. By doing regular exercises, youngsters can build up mental and physical endurance as well as increase their height. Besides, they can develop an interest in their favorite sport such as basketball, swimming, badminton, which they can enjoy in later stages of life to release their stress from study and work. Finally, the vitamin D absorbed from outdoor activities play an essential role in a child’s growth.
In conclusion, playing computer games for long period is detrimental to the physical and mental health of youngsters. Therefore, children should be motivated to have a healthy lifestyle and take gentle exercise to promote their health and well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77063467864 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7791430977 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15802043608 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592251421902 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492280035781 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101518083027 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059650099728 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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