Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this opinion?

Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers any more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the recent development of technology, particularly the Internet, some people suggest that physical newspapers are no longer necessary. I, however, believe that this opinion must not be promoted because of the accessibility and reliability of printed pieces piece of information.

Even though some people might argue that the Internet is more convenient to update news, newspapers are rather more accessible to the majority of the society, as they could be purchased at a low cost at any local supermarkets or grocery stores. On the contrary, one must not only pay for the Internet service fee, but one also need to possess a technological device to read blogs, articles, and e-newspapers. Were printed pieces piece of information to be removed, the class of blue-collar workers would likely become unaware of the current events due to the higher price of the modern approach.

Another reason why the traditional method of spreading information should be maintained is because of its authenticity. Only well-established and renowned writing units can produce physical newspapers, which feature verified details, whereas any Internet users may falsify information online then spread it, given the free nature of the network system. Hence, newspapers readers will update news without any doubt or suspicion, unlike their counterparts on the Internet. The issue of modified information has grown so troublesome that some schools nowadays warn students regarding the risk while they are browsing on the Internet.

To recapitulate, newspapers cannot be replaced by online news since the former is more accessible and trustworthy than the latter. Should people keep practicing the conventional approach, the problem of illiteracy and fake information may be subdued.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47619047619 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99283392971 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.689893263 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344636080724 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143442328136 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211145819121 0.0667982634062 316% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277551782486 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.363434285634 0.056905535591 639% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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