Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
People have divergent opinions as whether a sport event which is ubiquitous in the world brings various merits or demerits to a country. In my opinion, I suppose that events are one of the most effective ways to prove a country’s strengths to the others around the world.
There are two reasons why some people believe that it is bad to hold any international events. Firstly, launching an international event costs a huge sum of money in the national budget. This means the governments have to levy taxes and put pressure on their citizens. Those who are the poor do not need to have such events because they want to lessen their financial burden. Secondly, there are some risks which can appear when a country organises an event. Taking Korea as an example, the World Cup 2002 had been held there. There were numerous scandals which football’s fan angry about the competent agencies and officials giving bribes to get Korea into the semi-finals. This leads to any bad reputation to Korea until now.
However, I would argue that a country should voluntarily hold an international event. The country is likely to develop its economy because such events can attract a plethora of tourists who come to and pay a lot of money for any services there. Besides that, the country can introduce many new technological advances or merchandise in this event. It seems to be an advertisement to sell and increase their profit after this event happened.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the country which hold an international event is likely to be more successful in introducing and advertising them to other countries around the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, i suppose, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91366906475 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75289628738 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7969582817 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241052466153 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820658466123 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607653805403 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144826497405 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213863290703 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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