Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, human activities have led to considerable changes in the world climate. This has become a big problem, and drastic measures are put forward to save our planet and our life. However, some people say that we should adapt to climate change instead of trying to stop it. I disagree with this viewpoint and believe that everyone should take action to prevent climate change.
First off, climate has contributed a lot to human activities ever since thousands of years ago. For example farmers grow crop depend on climate, transportation only works best under good weather, many annual event held under good weather condition,... People depend on it so much that only subtle climate variations can strongly affect their usual life, for instance sudden change in temerature may result in the loss of crops. If the changes are significant, it's hard to imagine the consequences.
Secondly, people are generally ignorant of the cause and harm of climatic fluctuations. The major cause of climate crisis are primarily greenhouse gases, which appear because human activities like cutting down and burning the forests. Combat climate can lead to change in the ecosystem, acidification of the ocean and even exticntion of certain species for example polar bears are under threat. It is such an alarming issues that human can not ignore. They have to take steps to prevent it. If all human just want to learn to live with climatic variation, the earth may be on the verge of destruction soon.
In conclusion, climate change is not what people shoud underestimate, ignore and live with. Everyone should take drastic steps to stop such climatic problem and protect our mother earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... event held under good weather condition,... People depend on it so much that only...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
...re under threat. It is such an alarming issues that human can not ignore. They have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10869565217 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61047644532 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7897319235 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229539169128 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775347511711 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805666285768 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148892922444 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549858485544 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.