Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
n today’s world, being lack of resting time is very popular. Indeed, many people use their leisure time for resting after a long working day, while other use their free time to develop their mind for reading or doing word puzzles. Both view has its own advantage and disadvantage, but the benefits of spending free time on reading book or doing word befundle has outweight the advantage of take a nap in their relaxation time
It’s clear that interpretate of book or solving sodoku in free times may bring variety of benefits. First of all, students can improving mind by enjoying a fairy tales or solve a word puzzle because it will improve their critical thinking and brainstorming skill. When they read a book, it’s clear that they have to use their imagination skills in order to comprehend the plot of the story. Moreover, by reading books and doing word skills, you can flip the problems over and over again, which may help you indetify its in different aspect, to understand its clearly and deeply. Secondly, by reading books, it can also improve your memory. By commemorate important historicals milestones for example, you can also improve your recollection better and more influence. It’s specially need for student in order to prepare for test.
On the other’s hand, some people say that resting at their free times has many advantage. First of all, after a working day, everyone is exasperated and taking a nap may be the best method for them to heal. Some scientist has also pointed out that resting make you feel better for a next fullfilling day. Secondly, taking a rest in leissure time may enhance the chance they review the mistake they got that day. A famous scientist has pointed out that by looking at yourself everyday, it’s a good chance to be more excellent day by day.
To sum up, both points of view has its own advantage and disadvantage. However, in my opinion, spending free times on brain-storm activity may have more advantage than taking a nap at that moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tale'?
Suggestion: tale
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...ay that resting at their free times has many advantage. First of all, after a working day, eve...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pointed out that by looking at yourself everyday, it’s a good chance to be more excellen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81739130435 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54193809432 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2300126653 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333256682845 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099227574001 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750180049513 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187333586332 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916653228314 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.