Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
t’s argued that moving the industrial corporations and institutions to more rural regions outside cities would be beneficial. It’s agreed that this movement has numerous benefits because it provides solutions for many problems in our society. This essay will firstly, discuss how this movement can solve the traffic and overpopulation problems as a main advantage, and secondly illustrate how green areas might be affected as an essential disadvantage.
Transferring massive companies to the countryside or regional areas will definitely affect our society positively. Because most people, presently, find difficulty to drive or to get to their work among crowded street, consequently, moving these companies to another place will entirely solve the traffic problem and provide more empty roads, which would have a positive and relaxing effect between our society members. Overpopulation, additionally, is another aspect that nobody can neglect. When the government takes a step forward to move these huge institutions, this problem won’t be existed anymore. On the contrary, more people would have chances to be employed.
Conversely, the drawback that could be resulted out of this movement is that green areas, which are ordinarily found in the countryside and regional areas, might be negatively affected. If the government kept building these enterprises there, the natural places would be extremely damaged. People, therefore, who used to spend their vacation and enjoy the view, won’t be able to have this kind of entertainment.
As previously stated, the benefits of building more organizations and moving the industry to regional places, such as providing solutions for many issues must be weighed against the drawbacks, such as ruining fabulous views because it won’t solely provide solution for traffic, which most people find it problematic, it will also give most people the opportunity to live comfortably. Overall, the advantages of having industrial places within regional territories outweigh the drawbacks because the extra empty roads would encourage the productivity of our society members, when the traffic problem is solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68518518519 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92598452825 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.6789642432 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.692307692 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186872256993 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729331302947 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502128072073 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119297005682 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266584806024 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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