Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
There has been a controversy about the role of museums that whether these locations are made for the purpose of entertainment or education. In my opinion, I believe that both of these can be comprised in a museum yet the value of learning should be prioritized
On the one hand, many people come to the museum to see strange and fascinating collections, which can be overwhelmed and reduce their stress. Many modern museums nowadays can also incorporate some technical devices into their exhibition in order to satisfy and elevate the experiences of visitors. Therefore, it can effectively help people to enjoy their moment at the museums as well as make them forget some of the work pressure that they are going through
On the other hand, it is claimed that everything in the museums is only meaningful as long as it is attached to its own historical events or figures so the main purpose of museums should be considered as a tool to enhance individuals’ knowledge. In detail, museums will become ordinary exhibitions if every kind of antiques is displayed without any relevant stories. Many museums employ historical guides to talk about the origins of their objects or offer headsets to let people listen to their commentary. As a result, people can be provided with relevant knowledge and deeper understanding of the value of an object they are observing
To conclude, although the best museums are the ones that can fulfill both factors of amusement and learning. I suppose that museums should consider their educational aspect as their prominent one. Museums can utilize their entertainment facilities as a more attractive and appealing approach of knowledge to the travelers and make it easier to teach people new things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, i suppose, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85776316883 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3584622256 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341721640443 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138961322472 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679573845096 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211999480474 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272104702738 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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