Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people's opinions differ as to whether or not newspapers are the most convenient method to approach news both and information. While there are some strong arguments about the benefit of reading newspapers, I believe other media could be a better way.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people might argue that newspapers do play the most crucial role in learning news and information. First, a piece of information or news formally written in newspapers would be carefully checked and verified. In contrast, information and news in other media, such as Facebook, might not be covered with double-checking. Without any doubt, the viewers might tend to daily approach with thousands of violent images or spams on those kinds of media. Second, it is said that reading traditional newspapers could prevent the people's eyes from contacting with blue-light coming directly from electric equipment's screens. As a result, the readers could avoid eye diseases, for example, eye-short sightedness. Therefore, it is recognized that the viewers could gain many benefits from newspapers.
On the other hand, despite the above argument, I support that plenty of media would contribute more advantages than newspapers. If it is concerned with convenience and speed for approaching information and news, nothing could compare with media from all accounts. To read the latest news, the viewers wait a few days later in their favorite newspapers. They could also approach those faster and more conveniently in media. In addition, all news and information posted or published on media, like Facebook, are non-fee and hardly require any cost, which takes more advantage over on newspapers. According to the national survey in 2018, the annual number of cut trees is approximately 3,000 hectares in Vietnam used for housing, wood manufacturing, and paper-making. By limiting the daily use of products made from paper included traditional newspapers, people tend to protect their environment daily. Employing media to approach news instead of newspapers might be a wiser choice to make our environment greener and more friendly.
In conclusion, newspapers are a convenient method to read news, however, I believe that other kinds of media could outweigh in the long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Many peoples opinions differ as to whether or not newspapers are the most convenient meth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34078212291 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89210706269 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6929250969 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241012501333 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788347560896 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447547586676 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172263109775 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302709578302 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.