Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In the era of social media , certain people argue that if an individ...
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...ive information about their surroundings , then newspapers are the best way to acq...
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...rs are the best way to acquire such news . While one school of thought holds that ...
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...are the best way to acquire such news . While one school of thought holds that there ...
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...ms through which a person could get news . This essay will closely scrutinize both...
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...th views before showing my final thought . On the one hand , one of the main adva...
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...wing my final thought . On the one hand , one of the main advantages of newspaper...
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...is accessible to all sections of society . So it can be a tool to spread the news ...
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.... So it can be a tool to spread the news . For example , it must be taken into acc...
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... a tool to spread the news . For example , it must be taken into account that indi...
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...ken into account that individuals still dont have access to modern technologies such...
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...many parts of the world. For this reason , newspapers can be a viable way to find ...
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...n be a viable way to find news. Moreover , they cover a wide range of topics in th...
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...range of topics in their bodies and thus , people can get a general view of what i...
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...eness of the society. On the other hand , it is important to keep in mind that th...
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...trolled by governments and authorities. There is nos doubt that they can be a way to manipul...
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...and thoughts of society. For this reason , getting news from other sources , espec...
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...reason , getting news from other sources , especially the internet , provides an o...
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... other sources , especially the internet , provides an opportunity to access more ...
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... more accurate knowledge than newspapers . For example , some countries only read ...
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... knowledge than newspapers . For example , some countries only read newspapers , t...
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...le , some countries only read newspapers , they dont know much about the world and...
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...e countries only read newspapers , they dont know much about the world and the thing...
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...rld and the things happening around them , so their knowledge becomes limited . Th...
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...hem , so their knowledge becomes limited . Therefore , newspapers should be consid...
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...ir knowledge becomes limited . Therefore , newspapers should be considered obsolet...
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...ing news especially in undeveloped areas , they can be manipulated by the authorit...
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...he authorities without any effort. Hence , to learn more accurate information , so...
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...nce , to learn more accurate information , sources of the internet can be an alter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01567398119 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86055374225 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9204640125 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27679142241 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924520232014 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488994359575 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173843999101 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288174863164 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.