Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that physical fitness is the key to success in sports, while others claiming that mental toughness is the most important factor in attaining sporting powers. In my opinion, both strengths are equally important and mutually exclusive.
On the one hand, it is commonly agreed that physical strength is the predominant component to achieve the standard requirement in sports. Most sportspeople are required to be physically fit so that they are able to perform physically challenging actions commonly found in the majority of sports. Also, athletes obviously should at least have companionable physical strength, if they want to beat other competitors. For example, a runner with short legs could not win a race against his long-legged opponents, and athletes competing in weightlifting are divided into different groups according to their weight because they cannot beat other candidates who are much heavier.
On the other hand, a strong mentality is also essential for any professionals to be successful. Pressure can get to the best sports stars and mental training is therefore a vital skill to possess. Elite athletes such as Roger Federer or Lionel Messi are perfect examples of players who remain claim and confident regardless of situations. They also point out that knowing that your brain will start to tell you that you’re tired and that you want to quit is the first hurdle, but once you overcome the initial fear response, you are in a guaranteed pathway to success. In addition, mental powers are demanded to endure the brutal training regimes necessary for modern athletes, and these are responsible for at least part of the physical capabilities that they develop.
In conclusion, it is impossible to say whether physical or mental strength is more important for sportspeople because they are both utterly indispensable.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31081081081 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86724626929 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9000630119 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289360642031 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108158741495 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939678658814 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213500097429 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12375060929 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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