Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree?
Prior to blood-curdling sins, many people wonder what the cause is behind most crimes. And more than a few of those ascribe the majority of crimes to poverty. In my opinion, however, I only agree with that for some extent and I have more than inclination about disagreement due to a range of other reasons analyzed around this matter, which is elucidated in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, in respect of objection, I believe that the poverty is only a tiny part of felony. In terms of objective reasons, the habitat, not including the poverty, may be considered to be one of the main causes. that is to say that, it could include a series of typical reasons such as lack of the emotional support or attention, association with bad friends, etc. To show, in fact, many notorious criminals in the world come from a wealthy family such as Kelly, Herman Mudgett, Bernie Madoff, Charles Ponzi, etc. In relation to subjective reasons, it derives from the perception and psychological problems of criminals, which is now studied by many scientists around the world.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that the poverty is also a piece of wrongdoing. Poorness pushes many people into the path of crime like theft and robbery, and such crimes are the premise of more terrible ones later. Thus, it is partly reasonable that the poverty could be one of the causes behind crimes, not most ones.
To sum up, the matter of causes behind sins which is really a very complicated one related to many fields needs to be more research. Moreover, it can not pin the entire blame for the poverty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 211, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, really, so, thus, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62095549132 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7044945084 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174616060808 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597722355987 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800692311915 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107666287968 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766499544827 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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