Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether scientists should focus on addressing health issues or other crucial problems has been a topic of discussion among the public. Each view has its own merits which will be elaborated below.
On the one hand, growing numbers of research upon personal and public health have many benefits. The first advantage is that they link directly to existence of humankind. Without proper studies conducted in health sector, epidemics and diseases would wipe out human beings on earth. For instance, Covid 19 has taken the lives of million people, otherwise vaccines were not created, the pandemic's impacts on the world could be more servere. The second merit is that increasing researches on human's health would subsequently result in better healthcare for the public, people are therefore provided with better medicines and treatments. Finally, with breakthoughs made in the health industry, people tend to have extended life expectency and old citizens are taken care better, which imply that individuals can work until their old age. It means that the general economy is beneficial. Thus, given improvement in the public health people may feel a sense of security and are able to contribute more to their society.
On the other hand, there are also urgent problems should be given attention from scientists. First, climate change is posing a great threat on lives of millions of people globally. Erosion, drought, flood and so forth not only destroy the livelihood of people but place many people's lives at risk. In addition, fast expansion of urbanization and industrialization deteriorate the nature which is the main culprit of disappearance of rare animals as well as flora and fauna. More importantly, there is a growing concern that the increasing population exerts a burden on the existing infrastructure and facilities which underscores the need for constantly expansing of human's accommodations. That is why scientific researches should cover a wide range of subjects to guarantee the development of the world as a whole.
In sum, even though the health is important, other issues also demand focus of the science community. I believe that both ideas are of equal importance and researchers should manage to meet the needs of both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 490, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24512534819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83495402634 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612813370474 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7220570746 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.611111111 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260192054265 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703844413621 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621353542597 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168414219294 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471288562911 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.