In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Despite the developments and breakthroughs in the agricultural sector, many people still suffer from hunger and malnutrition. This essay will highlight some primary cause of this and suggest some possible solutions fo this.
One of the main reasons of hunger from the developed age of agriculture is the appearance of modern technology. Many manufacturers tend to equip an abundance of contemporary equipment such as food machines or automatical devices which has artificial intelligence that was already programmed for agricultural works. Thus, the number of employees has been reduced throughout in this technological world. Moreover, the lack of human force means groups of unemployed people increase and do not have enough money for their own personal demand. To illustrate this, the beer packaging system is nearly automatic and just needs one staff for controlling. Hence, human malnutrition caused by modern technology.
Governments and large organizations should work together in order to effectively fight world hunger disaster. Firstly, it is necessary to send more engineers and experts to fields that they can do more research and find the most effective methods to improve the food productions of these areas. Secondly, take advances in farmers' experiences of farming that farmers can afford the worse situations and they can exactly calculate time to prepare to save their crops. Another solution, governments need to compose some laws to protect employees and guarantee jobs for them. Hence, the best way for these problems, governments, and organizations need to have cooperation.
To sum up, people still get pain from hunger and malnutrition in his developed age. Governments' and large organizations' cooperation is necessary for these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5873605948 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07934621333 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6495761502 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169828404181 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513721794158 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497540702959 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108236323662 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687090105236 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.