Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that students had better give payment to aff of their studying expenses since they are the direct beneficiaries of the academic environment, not from the social one. I agree with the former statement but also encourage the advantages of society to education.
On the one hand, students growing up being sent to schools and responsible for the tuition fees to be well educated. Obviously, inside the academic environment, they are taught the most basic principles of science and literature. For example, mathematics, algorithms as well as geography and history, all of them are included in studying programs. Furthermore, these bases help students to build the foundations and orient them to pursue their choices of both academic and career goals in the future.
On the other hand, society plays an important part in turning theories into real experience, especially useful to the interns and senior students. While the university provides theoretically based knowledge, the social environment helps to apply them by many unidentical errors and trials. Internships exemplify the former statement. A student, who majors in Financing and Secretary, deals with simple numbers and brief reports when in schools. Being an intern in senior years brings him chances to broadly examine statistics, database, incomes, and outcomes, not to mention various unexpected situations and mistakes, that force them to be quick-thinking and more determined. Finally, people spend years on self-accomplishment to reach maturity in society, so that finding financial assistance while studying is now widely supported.
In my opinion, education, whether in schools or society, is one of the must-pay categories to acquire knowledge, as long as they are suitable for everybody's passions and goals.
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Students should pay the full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In the oast when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they hace more opportunities to study abroad Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49637681159 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05316565566 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7120967707 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118094664147 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375505219838 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266993339836 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721461013998 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269986844926 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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