Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person.
Why do you think this is the case?
What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
With the advent of information technology, easy access to internet and cheap price of cellular phones, meeting online has gained enormous popularity among the younger generation. With that being said, they do not prefer meeting in person anymore as it was before the era of mobile phones.
There are several reasons of shifting the traditional physical hangout to online socializing. Firstly, young generations are quite fascinated with the modern information technology. A mobile phone can be used for multple functions. It can be handy for watching movies and videos instantly, for calling and texting easily, searching necessary information in he browser, creating interactive contents like animation, videos and posting opinion freely in the social media. For instance, when a teenage get this tool in hand, phychologically he or she becomes charmed and tend to spend more times with this. Furthermore, these activities cannot be done when they are together in a group of people. Hence, they prefer socializing online.
Secondly, many parents are now restricting their teenage boys and girls from hanging out with peers for various reasons such as fearing of being spoiled by bad company, to spend more time inhouse for study due to increase of competiton and socio-political instabilities in many countries. Which prevents young generations from socialtizing in person rather online communications is more easier for them.
There are many possible solutions to address this issue. Government can restrict use of mobile phones until a certain age, or restricting the opening a social account for a certain age period would be highly beneficial. Parents should take care of their boys and girls so that they do not get phones until they are mature enough to understand the pros and cons of using social media. Local voluntary organizations could b build up which could organize the social events where young generations could participate and meet peers personally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in the browser'?
Suggestion: in the browser
...easily, searching necessary information in he browser, creating interactive contents like ani...
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Line 4, column 382, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... person rather online communications is more easier for them. There are many possible solu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36451612903 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85986435719 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0880019079 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193973872732 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627967621598 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483999404605 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11934130728 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307678291302 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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