In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Todays, when doing marketing, companies often focus on new aspects that their products have. The following essay will elaborate the reason behind this approach and explain why this should be considered as an advantage.
By showing the newness they have created, manufactures can have more chances to beat their competitors. In fact, regardless of anything being sold, there are always hundreds of similar items on the market. If a company does not inform their consumers through its commercials that the product is latest in some aspects, it will not stand a chance to be noticed by purchasers meaning the possibility of being bought is almost zero percent. For example, people nowadays use their smartphone to take pictures and record videos a lot. So, whenever releasing a new version phone, producers usually promote new functions innovated related to its cameras such as adding more high resolution cameras or automated programs onto the phone to improving the quantity of taken photos and videos.
This should be beneficial for both customers and producers. Firstly, people always have new requirements and will be more likely to satisfy their needs with what are being offered on the market. For instance, when there is a need of foldable smartphone due to it a large screen making inconvenient to users, Samsung corporation instantly develop a series which enable users to fold their phones. Secondly, by offering customers new properties, companies are increasing their possibility to sell their products, and therefore boost their revenue.
In conclusion, attracting people’s attention on their products in advertisements is an effective way for brands to stand out from the competition. This is beneficial not only for customers but also for businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36917562724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83514130741 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0868560023 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279544223137 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941855738488 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056837405819 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168674733214 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223504690241 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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