In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, companies commonly have the tendency to stress new points of their products in the advertising they performed in order to sell more goods. In my opinion, this is a progressive development as it leads to more informed consumers.
Indeed, when an enterprise produces a new product, they need to consider the best way they are able to do to sell more and more products as much as possible. In order to reach the target, they definitely studied who is their potential customer and what these people are interested in. That is one of the reasons why, they often advertise their merchandise with unique features to attract customer’s attention and encourage them to buy and try them to experience the differences from other products on the market. Take Orion as an example. Recently, they have launched a kind of new pie that collaborated with Black Pink and their advertising video mainly focuses on points of difference such as packaging printed photos of Black Pink, pinky pie, and a lot of lovely stickers enclosed instead of the quality or taste of pies.
On the other hand, from the perspective of consumers, advertising highlighted new features will help them identify the advantages of the products, compare these characteristics with their needs and give choices to buy more easily. Chat GPT is a good case in point. According to their advertising, we know the application is an incredibly smart assistant, that surpasses all of the applications at present. It can help people write essays, produce content, develop code, etc. Of course, consumers can’t wait to experience these functions and they will want to own this app as soon as possible.
To sum up, enterprises advertising new products by emphasizing new features of them is a good way to increase sales. At the same time, this is a highly constructive phenomenon as it is leading to more informed consumers who are making better purchasing decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...redibly smart assistant, that surpasses all of the applications at present. It can help pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, kind of, of course, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01869158879 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90878331447 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563862928349 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2297232157 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220982681833 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713498137586 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497306764509 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143947634795 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242659801251 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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