There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Invention of wheel is one giant leap for mankind, where this is primary factor in development world although the human has found internet. This is because the wheel has made daily lives easier, and this has used to predict some conditions in the future.
Nowadays, human lives is very dependent on machines for doing some activities such as move to some places and manage raw materials to be some product like in a factory, so the people will get bad impact if the machines disorder. What is the consequence of this? If this happen, many sectors in human life will experience failed such as agriculture and industry. Evidently, discovering tractor and other agriculture’s device in 21 century have increased rice yields in Indonesia. Since the farmer using such device, Indonesia has become one of the biggest rice producers in South East Asia region.
Moreover, the wheel has used to know what will happen in the future. Development of knowledge has developed many machines for solving problem which will happen such as disaster and natural phenomenon. For example, since tsunami and earthquake disaster around 7.0 SR in 2004 in Aceh Province, scientists tried to make new inventions like machine detection being put in the deep sea to predict such disaster, so the people can prepare to avoid this disaster. This invention gives the huge benefit to tackle negative impact of disaster.
In conclusion, the machine has given enormous impact in human life, hence human activity become easier, and this has helped to predict the natural phenomenon which can damage this earth. Hopefully presenting of machine can be used to appropriate the function.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6768617267 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.682139964 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227923330518 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857586018043 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473466892183 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141379338603 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469242711586 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.