Topic: Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by
parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free
time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Raising children's journeys is one of the top prioritized concerns among countries around the world. While there is argued that parents should make a detailed activities plan for children in their spare time, I contend that it would be better to let children be more autonomous and free with the purpose of nurturing their inborn talents. This essay will shed light on both views before making a final note.
One major ground behind the rising trend is that parents are well-positioned to take charge of making decisions for their children, even daily activities. This is because parents definitely get a better knowledge of which activities will facilitate their children regarding guarantee comprehensive development. In fact, parents are equipped with various courses in accordance with nurturing children in appropriate ways, including books, online communities, and advice from experts. Obviously, on those social platforms such as websites or private Facebook communities, parents may get instant access to relevant information at their fingertips, thus researching a large array of both indoor and outdoor activities for kids in educational and moral approaches. To give an example, a Facebook community “We Trek” provides numerous posts which analyze both pros and cons of camping trips regularly. The author also emphasizes on tremendous benefits that children are likely to gain after this trip through helpful advice about necessary facilities and instructions. By following those rules, parents could organize an effective camping trip, creating a memorable experience for their children.
Nevertheless, I still hold a belief that freedom of choice plays an important role to enable children to develop their unique talents. In fact, most youngsters engage in activities that fascinate them intrinsically, thus promoting individual interests. Gaudi, the foremost proponent of Catalan architectural school, was allowed to follow his own spots, exploring shapes and patterns in nature during his childhood. These observations later foster the inspiration for extraordinary designs such as Sagrada Family. Therefore, unless his parents had given him freedom of choice instead of forcing him to pursue popular fields such as medicine or business, his gifted capabilities would have been inadvertently neglected.
In conclusion, although parents might be capable of orienting their children by making more informed selections, children should be made free to follow their own interests. Therefore, from my perspective, parents should accompany their children, and support them as mutual soulmates so that children might comfortably to indulging in their strong aspects, organically identify potential personal professional passions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...ued that parents should make a detailed activities plan for children in their spare time, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96011179693 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634567901235 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8792061758 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.176470588 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8235294118 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305937997285 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884315375113 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927658603213 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197608527498 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103359272163 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.