Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
It is true that tourism is developing so fast that there are many arguments about what it brings to the countries, benefits or drawbacks. To my view, both positive and negative factors contributing to that kind of industry.
Firstly, when considering the constructive side, there are numerous of profits which tourism provides us. As we can obviously see that tourism plays an important role in the development of a nation’s economy. Take mountainous areas as an example, many local people can benefit from the job opportunities that tourism offers them because these days, they can make a wealth of choices to get the jobs they want such as instructors for the tourists and souvenir salesman to earn their livings. In addition, the promotion of tourism also has an imperative effect on culture. In the era of integration, every country has a strong desire to share the quintessence of their elegance with others so that the countries can become more connected.
On the other hand, tourism development is also the cause of many problems, especially pollution issues and culture clashes. When it comes to tourism, holidays and vacations are also concerned. After every big holiday, there will appear a large number of articles about the awareness of tourists and the alert of pollution due to nothing left but trash. Moreover, the development of tourism is the process that put the traditional culture into the modern world. To point out, many customs have been changed so that the tourists can easily experience them, which can lose the cultural identity
In conclusion, everything has its own perks and tourism is not the exception. Therefore, we cannot eliminate it from our society. Maybe the best thing we can do is trying to promote its effective side and limit its unfavourable one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s of profits which tourism provides us. As we can obviously see that tourism plays...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...er every big holiday, there will appear a large number of articles about the awareness of tourist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04713804714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76697624402 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7891858027 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145133984023 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510564392249 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301274086214 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082657206618 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305617180444 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.