Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages?
It seems like a common tendency that more and more people need to acquire higher qualifications through online education offered by universities or colleges. In my opinion, this kind of training gains more popularity on modern people with more benefits than drawbacks.
Distance learning from the Internet brings tremendous convenience in many aspects. To begin with, only a few time and cost consumption could make people explore the knowledge which they like. This means that it is an efficient way to improve their theoretical knowledge and comprehensive skills with full of flexibility. As a result, people would continue to promote their social status. Furthermore, this form of education also could help to create more job opportunities. For example, some people who are expert in some area, as an online teacher, impart knowledge to those people who want to win social recognition. Therefore, a sense of achievement would be built in their daily lives.
On the other hand, some people believe that this kind of courses lose their effects without enough supervision. In other words, it could only take responsibility for those students who are self-controlled and easy to understand the knowledge. This is because that there is no real teacher around people to stimulate people’s motivation in the dedication to gain knowledge. However, the designer of these courses have noticed that proper homework and feedback should be involved after class. It is sensible for both universities and students to use this chance to foster their reputations.
In conclusion, it is an irresistible trend that online colleges’ courses with qualifications become more popular as a new choice for people to develop their levels. I believe that people should understand its role on how it help to improve the quality of lives and social status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
... in many aspects. To begin with, only a few time and cost consumption could make people ...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...le should understand its role on how it help to improve the quality of lives and soc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, of course, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32081911263 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99154496628 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6026113318 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119629103128 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409388627234 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467480841618 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744379464177 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192616020694 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.