As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Enterprises are facing the dilemma of besides earning money, they should also take public responsibilities into consideration. Recently, this phenomenon has been brought to public attention with people standing on two different sides. Personally, I completely agree with the view that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
On the other hand, not only maximizing earning is the top priority of cooperation, but also a major benefit to society as a whole. The more money they earn, the more tax they have to pay. As a result, the authorities can put more revenue into the community in order to improve the qualities of the public, including the environment and health. Secondly, if the firms earn huge profits, they will have more chances to expand their business. In other words, many companies will be put into operation to gain a competitive edge in the market, which will create more job opportunities for the jobless.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why businesses should also accept that they have social responsibilities. The first reason is that their activities have an effect on the environment. With the high ozone layer depletion, this may be explained by the fact that the discharge chemical waste the cooperation put into the air which leads to the problem. If company bosses cut down on emissions they release, pollution will be controlled. Another reason is that the companies should pay their commercials to those who are less fortunate. For instance, the Vinamilk and Universe each year have their own scholarship and giving charitable donations which are not only philanthropic actions but also will gain their public image.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18581081081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93216580865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4187646437 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184465955776 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643075351307 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723479976634 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121848511937 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536350131767 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.