As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views with regard to the issue about social obligations of entrepreneurship. From my point of view, I believe that companies should contribute more to society than simply make money.
On the one hand, I agree that it is of great necessity to gain money in order to survive in such a competitive economic world. It is money that maintains the running systems of business, including state-of-the-art utilities and professional staff. On top of that, they also need to invest in a wide variety of improvements to satisfy customers’ changing needs as well as commercial activities to publicize their commodities for reason of lasting success. If a company’s budget is even not enough to operate those fundamental activities, any concerns about donation is irrelevant. In other words, only with good financial health can a company make a positive contribution to society.
On the other hand, instead of running with the sole aim of maximizing profit, entrepreneurship should also take social obligations into account. One burden that managers carry is to treat their employees well rather than exploiting them. For example, they should usually pay attention to worker’s welfare or organize travelling tours to ensure happy lives for laborers. I also like the idea that businesses could raise funds or perhaps provide financial aids for local charities, environmental projects and educational initiatives. Finally, bosses can devise an annual charity event in which all members of companies could themselves participate, such as planting trees or offering presents .
In conclusion, I firmly believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, with regard to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50740740741 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25727230225 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659259259259 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8201305789 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157173341986 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486090431849 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304673147762 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902146705253 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194924326309 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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