Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People's opinion differ as to whether or not computers are the most crucial development in the last centuries. It can not be denied that computers play an important roles in daily life, and human depends on computers deeply. I believe that it is an irreplaceable device in last centuries and for many years later.
The most useful function of computers is that it bring more information to human society. In fact, compared to the past, when the information sources was extremely limited and people could not access to the media easily, those things have been changed recently. In technology era, thanks to computers, with just one clicks, everywhere and anytime the information is accessed quickly and conveniently. There is evidence that the countries or organizations which are rich in data can have a high role in the trade markets. Without the internet, individuals can be obsolete and out-of-date with innovative technologies.
Besides the aspect of information, the computers are the fundamental tools to develop and implement other significant utilizationin our life. With the help of computers, there are increasing break-through developments such as Internet, applications and smart devices. Specifically, the Internet only implemented after the birth of computers, and the benefit of Internet is enormous. By using it, we can have more utilities like social networks to establish relationships, open MOOC learning, online meetings. The applications and smart devices also improve our living qualities, like the robots help human cleaning home, do tough and dangerous works.
In conclusion, the computers bring massive benefits to our life and it can be considered the greatest inventions in the last one hundred years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
Peoples opinion differ as to whether or not computers are the most crucial develo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r as to whether or not computers are the most crucial development in the last cen...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...denied that computers play an important roles in daily life, and human depends on com...
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Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial networks to establish relationships, open MOOC learning, online meetings. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, as to, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44074074074 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07328191489 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5062349638 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118865066647 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421402277662 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391337419539 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850702942399 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490694214271 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.