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Globally, the worldwide free internet services have been facilitated human beings with a plethora of knowledge through the latest technological gadgets and the majority of these contents are available free of cost. This essay would argue that this development is more user-friendly and save an individual's valuable time and money considered as pros and the importance got reduced due to its spot availability considered as cons.

On the one hand, due to the evolvement of the digital platform, it becomes so easier for people to have access to the content published on the internet. Because of this, people would find it easily with a lower rate compared with the past. Besides this, it not only saves the prominent time but also money so that they can spend the same on other essential things. For example, with having smartphones we can read newspapers and articles without going to a library on cell phones with the facility of internet only.

However, many publications which produced with hard efforts but as it is found with zero cost, the majority of young ones do not value them. Owing to this, many authors have to suffer a lot to find their earning sources, and their articles not able to get enough fame as considered by authors. For instance, nowadays due to many biography books available on the internet without a cost, the majority of people avoid purchasing it and the owner has to face many hurdles to earn their wages.

In conclusion, although immediate availability on the websites produces many obstacles to a writer's financial life, the benefits it provides cannot be neglected. This development gives them a chance to earn more revenue by saving their time.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...elopment is more user-friendly and save an individuals valuable time and money considered as p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a writer' or simply 'writers'?
Suggestion: a writer; writers
...the websites produces many obstacles to a writers financial life, the benefits it provide...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99645390071 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68182887718 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7558898364 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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